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His Side of The War

Contributed by Deidra_Carmichael on Wednesday, 20th August 2014 @ 03:18:51 PM in AEST
Topic: Event

Woe to her who let herself succumb to the enemy's deception
A precious evil, an angelic specter with dropped wings
The young lady believed the comforting lies about a dying God
About her purpose to take Him out for the good of a new Earth
Well it's high time she relearns who her maker is
With all His faculties, His glory, His absolute power and love

It is I who am fighting on His side of the war
Routing for Michael's angels, already victorious
Faith is the key, not mere weapons
Who are you to say that God's created the mess
That He is the cause for a dying planet
Do you not recall the effects of Adam and Eve
The earth is cursed yet its inhabitants are granted eternal life
So blame the devil, not the Almighty

It's a shame you used your eyes and not your spirit
To choose a fatal end just as your master did
It's only a matter of time that the flames will consume you and the masses
That is unless you drop the sword, and the slingshot
Raise your hands to the sky rather than aim at it
Rededicate yourself to Him and truly repent
For He would be more than willing to take you back
To see you on His side of the war

Copyright © Deidra_Carmichael ... [ 2014-08-20 15:18:51]
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Re: His Side of The War (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Thursday, 21st August 2014 @ 05:55:54 AM AEST
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I read up a bit on Marisol and I have to agree that it's a tad out there and from a religious standpoint, of course quite blasphemous.

I really enjoyed your poem once I had background on Marisol.

Well done, Deidra.

Invierno

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