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But this is my Road.
Contributed by
northernlights
on
Monday, 18th August 2014 @ 03:11:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I'm so tired
with the world screaming in my ear.
Telling me who I am or who they think I should
Be,what I should do,and I seek the silence, the
Stillness of darkness and my own tears as I face
My own fears,and more than ever I know I'm alone.
Your voices bring me rage, I know this is my road
And I know it carries only my footprints but sometimes
I join in the pretence and the reality just gets harder.
To you I am the strength,the energy, the life the one
That just keeps walking, but I'm the one who just once
In a while wants you to share the load
But this is my road.
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northernlights
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2014-08-18 15:11:35]
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Re: But this is my Road.
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by steven_fenton123 on
Monday, 18th August 2014 @ 04:22:07 PM AEST
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Re: But this is my Road.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th August 2014 @ 01:21:30 AM AEST
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It may be your road but it would be nicer if you did not have to travel it alone, eh? It's beneficial to have a support system...help. Sadly, some of us don't get those benefits.
The emotion, the feelings in this poem made me feel like I was an em-path, maybe. I felt the struggle and just wanted to reach out and give a hug.
As always, poetry in action from the great Anna!
*hug*
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Re: But this is my Road.
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th August 2014 @ 02:22:34 AM AEST
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i'm reading this as the road is each of our own lives and
not an actual road- even if you are tangibly walking on one
in your poem, i hope you show this to whoever its about, as
they need to read it...
hugs n' love nessa |
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