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Public Place
Contributed by
shelby
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Monday, 18th August 2014 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Summer eve beckons, call of the night.
Late night swimming,
free spirits delight, its peaceful,relaxing
least it should be.
But it is not, no peace or delight
instead terror and fright.
Sad, devils roam in the pale darkness of night.
Uninvited, do not know you,
no chat, nor glance
what happened to ones own space(bubble)?
Rules are meant to be broken
just do what you want.
The law?Well only until something else happens.
Nothing we can do,
creepy, yes, not normal yes
did he touch you?
Well why did you call us for?
Flash lights in the darkness,
peeking behind tree's and bushes
He, of course no where to be found.
Yet it took over an hour for anyone to get here.
Its a public place, no law was broken
though non of it should have happened
but it did.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2014-08-18 03:00:00]
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Re: Public Place
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by Invierno on
Monday, 18th August 2014 @ 07:59:59 AM AEST
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edgy and left me disquieted. Good job.
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Re: Public Place
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by FindingMyself on
Monday, 18th August 2014 @ 12:23:47 PM AEST
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Very interesting I like the turn it took at the end...keep writing!
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Re: Public Place
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by Voice of the Silent on
Tuesday, 19th August 2014 @ 09:04:44 AM AEST
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I like it, dark poems usually draw me though, well written but sad. It's terrible what people can get away with in the confines of the law. hope all is well
Hope to read more soon
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