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Midnight poetry flight
Contributed by
shelby
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Sunday, 17th August 2014 @ 02:34:52 AM in AEST
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City beats,always sound
dark shadows mean wake up.
It may be just a Friday night
I not on the town,
maybe to old for that now?
Iv loved the moon beams
this past week
and late night swimming
beneath that full moon.
Ignore the city, for awhile
pretend I'm in my own little space
of nature, and star shine and moon beams
and night creature serenades
and I sigh softly.
Then the Metro noise
reaches out and slaps me
as I paddle pool water
stop and look around.
Yep not in my own space
its actually shared by many
and a stranger peers in the shadows
beneath the light shining
just watching me.
I take my midnight poetry moment
and sail back for home
walking across burning asphalt
shadows dancing, the city beating
the wind dances in the pines
but the world around me isn't quiet
and no it never belongs in private just to me.
Eyes peer in the night.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2014-08-17 02:34:52]
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Re: Midnight poetry flight
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 17th August 2014 @ 07:41:33 AM AEST
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very, very nice. Great job capturing the city feel. I was right there.
Invierno |
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Re: Midnight poetry flight
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 17th August 2014 @ 11:21:38 AM AEST
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Great write, I enjoyed the trip, thanks for bringing me along.
The Phantom |
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Re: Midnight poetry flight
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 17th August 2014 @ 03:13:27 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write a perfect gifting of yourself. |
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Re: Midnight poetry flight
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by FindingMyself on
Sunday, 17th August 2014 @ 04:16:18 PM AEST
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I really like how you painted the city with your words,this is great poetry,keep writing!
Stay Blessed! |
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Re: Midnight poetry flight
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by Blackheart on
Tuesday, 19th August 2014 @ 10:36:27 AM AEST
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| Your city is honored by this piece as lovely as you capture it. Kinda inspires me to honor my hometown with amazing poetry. Awesome poem. |
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Re: Midnight poetry flight
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th August 2014 @ 02:12:07 AM AEST
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a breathtakingly beautiful poem, penned in your
exquisite style and imagery off the charts, it screams 'reality!'.......
hugs n' love nessa |
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