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Come deep in the meadow under our willow
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 05:47:42 PM in AEST
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Come deep in the meadow under our willow
come lay your head on this pillow
Of soft green grass
Lay down your head close your eyes
Watch me swing
Listen to the branches creak
A dead man is no company for a girl so alive
You decorate me with daises your heart beat keeps this hollow shell warm
In you dreams of tomorrow
So sweet but on time borrowed
Will be met with sorrow
Because we both know it's true
I lay here dead under this willow
Six feet below
Guarding you as you rest on a grass pillow
Here is only where the dreams feel true
Here is only where I can love you
So lay down close your eyes
A dead man is no company for a girl so alive
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2014-08-16 17:47:42]
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Re: Come deep in the meadow under our willow
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by dvtpdw on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 06:31:34 PM AEST
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| Yet as life ends, so life does begin. I liked the story within the story, and the true heart it symbols. Very strong, emotional write, P |
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Re: Come deep in the meadow under our willow
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 08:34:27 PM AEST
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beautiful .. an open invite to beauty.
Free... relaxing spirit, is the best of all
imagery. It brought me to view the calm.
Thanks!
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Re: Come deep in the meadow under our willow
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by softerware on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 09:54:14 PM AEST
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You wrote a scene for us to watch.."Watch me swing. Listen to the branches creak"..
I love the line "Here is only where the dreams feel true"…
You have left me to suppose that as we walk among headstones, thousands of generations walk with us.
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Re: Come deep in the meadow under our willow
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by shelby on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 11:28:34 PM AEST
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So deeply moving a verse, I have a couple tears.
Beautiful!
Michelle |
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