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It's Not So Bad
Contributed by
ArloDisarray
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Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 05:11:19 PM in AEST
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I know my life is better than most
Trying to think of good times I've had
But sometimes I feel so lachrymose
Please remind me that it's not so bad
I'm one of the few not broken-hearted
And I try to keep from getting too sad
I've never finished anything that I've started
Please remind me that it's not so bad
I feel free, and mostly content
Though there are times that I get really mad
I feel my life's been time well spent
Still, remind me that it's not so bad
I try not to get discouraged, like everyone does
Or let life take what I have
'Cause everyone where he is, started out where he was
So I know now that it's not so bad.
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Re: It's Not So Bad
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by dvtpdw on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 06:33:25 PM AEST
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| So few are able to recognize the life within their life; this write lets us into an inner working. I liked the meanings within and without. Very nice, intense, meaningful write, P |
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Re: It's Not So Bad
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 08:48:59 PM AEST
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ArioDissary,
This is an array of reasonable temperament
sweet like knowing jazz enough to breathe
through relative degrees of sorrow, we start someplace, and end perhaps in the same
lost way, unless...
You search well enough and you might find a tone like yours that must recall something bright!
Love all your work btw!
Peace!
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Re: It's Not So Bad
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by Sol on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 09:08:46 PM AEST
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| It can be hard to maintain a positive outlook in life, and the desire to be reminded our lives were good is something we can all understand. Very nice. |
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Re: It's Not So Bad
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by softerware on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 10:03:16 PM AEST
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I so enjoyed the repeated rhythm, the resounding reminder..the positive force you call upon. The human spirit is, as you remind us, resilient, resourceful, and self affirming! Thank goodness Edison didn't get discouraged or we'd all be computing by candlelight!
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Re: It's Not So Bad
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by shelby on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 11:40:43 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this. It takes a lot of living to live a life, I love how you came full circle with this.Powerful.
Michelle |
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