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When I'm With You
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Friday, 15th August 2014 @ 10:57:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I’m with you the time slips by with ease.
This pleasant interlude is most complete,
it’s break from life’s thoughts, dear, without replete
of never ending cares without surcease.
Can I not be prince speaking lines that please,
and place at feet rich treasures seldom seen.
And you’ll have ending, my full regal queen
of never ending cares without surcease.
This promise I do make on bended knees,
celestial hosts in heaven know it’s true.
With me, love, you’ll have no sorrowing view
of never ending cares without surcease
When I’m with you the time slips by with ease.
less never ending cares without surcease.
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ramfire
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2014-08-15 10:57:11]
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Re: When I'm With You
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by dvtpdw on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 06:35:41 PM AEST
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| The truth of love combined, enjoyed, honest and fully exposed, explored and complete. I really enjoyed this write and thank you for seeing love as it truly can be. Nice, nice, great write, P |
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Re: When I'm With You
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 29th August 2014 @ 06:12:17 PM AEST
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You've found that perfect bond that some people strive for their whole life.
Hold onto it and cherish it.
Nice work.
Steve |
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