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I NEED A FRIEND
Contributed by
alicewhite
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Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 05:37:36 PM in AEST
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I need a friend , how sad is that?
and i miss my windmill rainbow days
at night when those days shone oh so rainbow bright in the star filled shooting star wishing spell night
midnight wishes blew the candle and i stopped dreaming
these eyes saw suddenly what lied beneath the lies silver tongue was weaving
and oh how my heart aches achingly aching.
wake me up when windmills turn with love.
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Re: I NEED A FRIEND
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 05:50:28 PM AEST
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truly beautiful! o! and happy birthday alice:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: I NEED A FRIEND
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 05:58:04 PM AEST
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AW, beautiful, Full of love hope they turn for you
This is very nice!
Peace! |
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Re: I NEED A FRIEND
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by JohnRhinem on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 06:41:39 PM AEST
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| Makes myself think of the, Smashing Pumpkins, the more you know the less you feel; or something like that ? Also, James Taylor's, you've got a friend ~ Especially we would most say, if, Your eyes are turned towards their stars where, `THE FATHER OF LIGHTS,` pours, `HIS LOVE,` into all their precious creations hearts.... |
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Re: I NEED A FRIEND
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 07:42:41 PM AEST
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Beautiful and poignant. Lets hope the winds of change blow for you.
Cheers,
Mickey. |
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Re: I NEED A FRIEND
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by Voice of the Silent on
Sunday, 10th August 2014 @ 04:30:04 AM AEST
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Liked the rhyme you left my comment so much thought I'd come read a few of your poems. And I'm liking it friends can be hard to find hard to keep no matter how many people you meet but everyone finds a select few that stand by you a friend something everyone should have have never fear sometimes friends are close and near I know there are plenty here.
Great read hope to read more soon
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Re: I NEED A FRIEND
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 10th August 2014 @ 11:48:13 PM AEST
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I feel you on this flow,
when you see the real story behind so called friends
it can be hurtful.
Good poem
oh and happy late Birthday.... |
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Re: I NEED A FRIEND
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by ming on
Friday, 6th February 2015 @ 10:43:48 PM AEST
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You are my new fav. Shhh. Don't tell the other children. ;)
ming |
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Re: I NEED A FRIEND
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 8th June 2015 @ 01:06:54 PM AEST
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Time to wakeup
Love is in the air.............
Kisses
James |
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