|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Make Me Laugh
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 05:22:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
My remote has failed me again
Another slide of my finger brings disgust
As I search for content that will make me laugh
A few giggles through the rubbish I find
Yet to pass piggery and corruption is most displeasing
For my eyes are not to look upon such
The expletives start an hyena like uproar
Crude subjects only are praised by the audience
I am in search of the few with rolled eyes
Lost in the wave of shallow immorality
Go on, O beloved stand-up entertainer
Over here, glorified GIF poster
I challenge you, honorable sitcom and film
Hit me with your best script, indulge me
Persuade my humorous side to gain mere ratings
Come up with some wit and striking creativity
That will actually make me laugh
Copyright ©
Deidra_Carmichael
... [
2014-08-08 17:22:01]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Make Me Laugh
(User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 05:46:17 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Brilliant but sounds well *****y and spite full, but i still enjoyed reading it so its all good x |
|
|
Re: Make Me Laugh
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 05:48:20 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this brought such a smile to my face, as i was cruising channels
and stopped to read your clever poem, i talk to them and cheer
them on to bring comedy! -to no avail mostly,
hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
Re: Make Me Laugh
(User Rating: 1 )
by JohnRhinem on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 06:21:23 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| What ever happened to, Jerry Seinfeld ? I like it pure also and makes myself think of these impacts that this so called entertainment medium's genre in most ways has upon our societies especially formative inklings toddlers in their vulerable cribs ~ I'll make you laugh baby girl! Great poem.... |
|
|
Re: Make Me Laugh
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 10:26:08 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Nothing like ol' Mr Ed shows, or Carol Burnett, or shows like that. I know what you're saying. I am guilty of enjoying some of the new "crap" too but some of it does indeed go over board.
Really enjoyed this. You bet your sweet bippy! ;-)
Thanks,
Tim |
|
|
Re: Make Me Laugh
(User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 11:52:03 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You have a fan club here!! My favorite line is "Lost in the wave of shallow immorality"..Wish you were a censor--we'd certainly enjoy a better set table if not the feast we long for!
You have "hit me with your best script" and you have my vote! Thanks for saying the necessary to remind us of the fluff we call entertainment.
softerware |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
