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TWO WINDMILLS
Contributed by
alicewhite
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Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 05:15:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Two windmills set apart set in a field set ablaze by the sunset
thats the image i first saw bring 4th your love
two things i talk of you stalk i desire come get
shadowing turmoil spoken land owner its turbines princess he said
sounds like hunt i called him and sank down to the tennis court with a shadow instead
and cried in the ear of that shadow of shadows and your silver back stuck in my head
oh oh now how so so no dont go talk it up like yeah.
unfinished sympathy
unfinished
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alicewhite
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2014-08-08 17:15:20]
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Re: TWO WINDMILLS
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by JohnRhinem on
Saturday, 9th August 2014 @ 12:44:12 PM AEST
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| Definitely an abstract moment unto myself at least although one can sense the depth it's words have been drawn from..Also, i love the creativity as somewhat uniqueness: very cool and may 'Sympathy find her heart.... |
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Re: TWO WINDMILLS
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by Voice of the Silent on
Sunday, 10th August 2014 @ 10:20:55 PM AEST
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Very different and unique from what I usually see here, I like it the first line drew me in until the end
good read hope to read more
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