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The Hanging Tree
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 02:54:06 PM in AEST
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Come swing with me in my tree
We'll sway in the wind, dance in the breeze
Will you come sway by my side
in the hanging tree
I'm a strange man but don't leave me
Come meet me and my hanging tree
Where are you where have you been
Are you coming to see me
Will you come dance in the breeze
Darling you know we both belong in the vice
So will you come to me
Come face me at my hanging tree
When will you come this summer or when leaves turn to fall
Or will you run forever keeping your back to this never admiting your fault
Where are you where could you be
All I know is you should be here
Dancing in the breeze
Swinging with me up high
In My Hanging tree
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2014-08-08 14:54:06]
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Re: The Hanging Tree
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 03:40:57 PM AEST
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An interesting read: sounds like a man very keen on a woman, a woman retaining her prudish virtue, perhaps not so perfectly. Although I'd probably avoid the tree like her, I must say you put this nicely together. Take care and God bless,
Deidra |
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Re: The Hanging Tree
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 03:51:59 PM AEST
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seems to me they are both guilty, she avoids the tree
and he takes the blame and gets hung, kind of a weird
love story, ...would have been so nice had they been on
a swing in a tree instead; though at that point i think they'd wish also for such,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Hanging Tree
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 07:14:15 PM AEST
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| Today i swung both my legs side to side to strengthen the muscle weak in me deep inside, yesturdays i started to write as though i was hung up with you in your, our hanging plight, beautiful and haunting visionary esp like words your write here tonight, , i love it x |
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Re: The Hanging Tree
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 07:52:19 PM AEST
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This poem is acidic softness,
and anticipatory melancholy.
Truly a fantastic write.
Cheers,
Mickey. |
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Re: The Hanging Tree
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 10:20:30 PM AEST
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Wow...quite a pick up technique you have there. Lets go die together. ;-)
Or, I'm guessing that she got away and the author had to take the rap.
Very enjoyable read.
Thanks,
Tim |
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