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Counterfeit
Contributed by
The_Phantom
on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 12:37:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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As I pick up this pen the thoughts begin,
Poetry flows, my body her instrument,
Words and rhyme age with time,
Memories fade, but emotions are blind,
The eyes may see, the hands may feel,
The heart will beat, but the mind makes it real,
The skin can burn, and the flesh will disappear,
Love is something you can not fear,
Don't waste your time in hopes someone will care,
Keep moving forward, life is meant to be shared,
Love will find you when you least expect it,
Keep an open mind, your first thought may be counterfeit.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
Copyright ©
The_Phantom
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2014-08-08 12:37:14]
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Re: Counterfeit
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 02:30:56 PM AEST
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this poem spoke to me- a lot! also it is penned so beautifully,
matt, your poetry is always special, love the line: Words and
rhyme age with time, that really stood out for me, thanx for
sharing! blessings,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Counterfeit
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by Voice of the Silent on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 02:55:45 PM AEST
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I like it, keep the poetry flowing this is great
hope to read more soon
-Voice |
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Re: Counterfeit
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 07:54:12 PM AEST
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Excellent flow and rhythm coupled with important messages.
Great write!
Cheers,
Mickey |
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Re: Counterfeit
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 10:16:50 PM AEST
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Sometimes a counterfeit can be very tough to spot but nevertheless, very sound advice.
A very unique write by a very talented and gifted poet. I am quite impressed.
Thanks,
Tim
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Re: Counterfeit
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 9th August 2014 @ 10:29:27 PM AEST
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Lovely and powerful words, Matt.... I've always enjoyed your work. Good to see you again...
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