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Stirring Up Their Crowds
Contributed by
JohnRhinem
on
Thursday, 7th August 2014 @ 10:09:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Just as it were two thousand years gone by
These rulers scribes as pharisees sliding about
Her crowds seeking it's own this survival of sorrow
Repressed love's hearts and what about the children lost
Shall we crucify your dreams ? Secular chains his pagans species.
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JohnRhinem
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2014-08-07 10:09:00]
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Re: Stirring Up Their Crowds
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 7th August 2014 @ 10:17:44 AM AEST
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A delicate observation managed with skill. I like poems that don't spell it out like math class. You've done a great job here; I get the content message in artful receipt.
Well done, JohnRhinem.
best,
Invierno |
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Re: Stirring Up Their Crowds
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 02:51:06 PM AEST
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beautifully penned with such tangible heart moving sadness,
hugs n' love nessa |
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