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Mend My Heart
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
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Monday, 4th August 2014 @ 06:45:47 PM in AEST
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Oh just one kiss I beg of you
One hug well-spent and truly meant
I'll ask no more on my honor
Mend my heart; I can't take it any longer
The butterflies flew away and the flowers withered
So I went inside for a change of scenery
All I found was shattered china, the whole set
What I do from here, I don't know just yet
To return outdoors I'm afraid for chill
But I can't remain locked in here
In my thoughts, my breaking heart
Please come in and make it happy here
For I can't afford to shed another tear
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Deidra_Carmichael
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2014-08-04 18:45:47]
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Re: Mend My Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 4th August 2014 @ 06:59:39 PM AEST
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awe, so sadly bittersweet, truly beautifully penned, and heartfelt,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Mend My Heart
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by emystar on
Monday, 4th August 2014 @ 07:38:58 PM AEST
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Very touching indeed.
I can relate to this awesome writei
Huggs, blessing, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Mend My Heart
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by Invierno on
Monday, 4th August 2014 @ 09:27:16 PM AEST
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Awesome job, Deidra.
"The butterflies flew away and the flowers withered
So I went inside for a change of scenery
All I found was shattered china, the whole set"
Very well done.
Best,
Invierno |
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Re: Mend My Heart
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by FindingMyself on
Tuesday, 5th August 2014 @ 05:21:20 AM AEST
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| I've gone through this feeling before,i know it is easier said than done but all you can do is stay strong and keep going.If it is meant to be then when God says it is time everything will fall into place. Keep writing I really enjoyed this take care and God bless |
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Re: Mend My Heart
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by JohnRhinem on
Tuesday, 5th August 2014 @ 01:45:39 PM AEST
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| Your painting is very beautiful! Time, shall claim love's prize....A drop of blood pierced it's thorn their kiss which formed this, Rose ~ KLove * |
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