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Those Eyes
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
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Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 08:07:33 PM in AEST
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Those eyes tell me two stories
Reflecting the one you are and the one you try to be
Your carefree laugh can make me laugh
Cynically at your performance
Yet hopefully for a turn around
Young lady, yes I address you as such
Why do you attempt to defy perfection
Silky golden waves surround your face
A witty and cheerful smile comes next
Let's mention those eyes again
Wide with wonder yet beady with observation
Accentuated by a chocolate tint
All truly depicts a girlish persona for us to see
There is no way to otherwise to convince me
You are as the Lord fashioned you
Those fancies you have are mere distractions
That wish to steer you from
Representing divine creation
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Deidra_Carmichael
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2014-08-03 20:07:33]
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Re: Those Eyes
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 08:18:21 PM AEST
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Beautiful. I very much enjoyed this read.
Invierno |
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Re: Those Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th August 2014 @ 12:20:41 AM AEST
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| WOW, such a beautiful read. Thank you. |
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Re: Those Eyes
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by Blackheart on
Monday, 4th August 2014 @ 03:21:12 PM AEST
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This is what I call Heart & Soul. Lovely poem, hope you show this to them because believe me, it'll do wonders for them on the inside
-Blackheart |
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Re: Those Eyes
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by FindingMyself on
Monday, 4th August 2014 @ 04:19:42 PM AEST
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| This is amazing I really enjoyed it |
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Re: Those Eyes
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 4th August 2014 @ 05:12:18 PM AEST
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she sounds lovely, this is so beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Those Eyes
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by JohnRhinem on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 04:37:37 PM AEST
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| You paint her so wonderfully this baby girl! Innocence struggling against impressionism's elite de factos ~ Beautiful, and one can see your poetic's gift.... |
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