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Tired
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
on
Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 08:04:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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It's in your eyes clear as day
You're tired, cant hide it anyway
Another all nighter? Forget it
Since daytime will show its unbearable
Dead as a door nail you tend to look
Your eyes are begging to just shut
I look over and see you are trapped
In a world where battles and points make up life
I admire your hobbies I really do
But it seems they have entirely consumed you
No wonder our pep seems to have dwindled
Sleep is for the weak? Looks like your time is up
Hit the pillow, drop the control, drift off into dreamland
For your beloved will be wide awake
When the sun rises and her day has just begun
Please do not let my only companion be
The sky above or the blazing sun
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Deidra_Carmichael
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2014-08-03 20:04:01]
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Re: Tired
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 08:21:43 PM AEST
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SOOOOOOO Wonderful a line, "Another all nighter? Forget it
Since daytime will show its unbearable"
Another perfect line "In a world where battles and points make up life"
Wow....what a write! I feel ya hear t and soul. Blessings on you,
Deidra.
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Re: Tired
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by FindingMyself on
Tuesday, 5th August 2014 @ 05:27:02 AM AEST
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| I loved this whole poem...My ex is the same way,it is like we want to help them and we know what is best for them but they don't see what we see and at one point there is nothing you can do except be there through thick and thin.As time goes by they tend to realize what is happening...Excellent work,keep it up! |
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