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This Secret
Contributed by
kailas
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Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 01:09:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Here is a secret
that nobody knows
Here are the roots
from which it grows
Here are the roses
on which it sleeps
and those are the thorns
that it must keep
Here is the wind
Where will it blow
Please take this secret
no one will know.
Copyright ©
kailas
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2014-08-03 01:09:08]
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Re: This Secret
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 01:16:29 AM AEST
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truly so beautifully penned, now i want to know the secret! lol,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: This Secret
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 01:51:30 AM AEST
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Such a perfect flow! I like it! Naturally the reader also wants to know the secret. Obviously it's no one's business.
Hope all is well with you.
Tim |
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Re: This Secret
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 02:53:13 AM AEST
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sadly the secret seems buried
Just where its roots call home no one seems to know
Will the wind carry its thorny
crown
Or will the wind blow it by your town
stuck in a cloud that could never
rain down
If you've tried too hard to dig too deep
its root is torn no longer the flower
your promise might wish to keep
I love this "Secret" a scrambled matrices
poem sadly too many dare not seem to wish to share
Oh think of the cost which is bothersome
to clearly define the obvious that divides us all
What is enough of a rose that might bloom
only to display Love
Dandy write Kailas!
Peace!
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Re: This Secret
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by desciple on
Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 12:56:00 PM AEST
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this write is amazing, very powerful..I enjoyed it
blessings...Keep sharing |
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Re: This Secret
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by JohnRhinem on
Tuesday, 5th August 2014 @ 02:04:36 PM AEST
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| Tis so lovely, these petals attached unto, her rose ~ Some poems simply feel beautiful....KLove * |
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