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You sit there
Contributed by
Lone_Cowboy_with_a_rose
on
Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You sit there
Unaware of my constant stare
You sit there
Do you even know I'm there?
You sit there
You consume all thought
You sit there
And the room begins to feel hot
As you sit there
What if I reached for your hand?
What if I dared to obey my heart's command?
You sit there unaware
And all I can do is stare
Wanting you to know how much I care
As you sit there
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2003-05-21 06:05:00]
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Re: You sit there
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by razorbladerose on
Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 08:19:15 AM AEST
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| Good write! You've managed to capture much emotion on the explanation. I think it brings back similar emotions in myself, I been there! Keep on posting your work! ;-) |
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Re: You sit there
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 10:02:21 AM AEST
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I liked this poem.Well done.Welcome to ypdc.Ill be looking for more of your work.
Michelle |
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