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Keep His Love
Contributed by
AmoriaDivine
on
Tuesday, 29th July 2014 @ 09:39:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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Tend to duck my head between my legs
My tail reaches my chin
Bend and make room for what he puts out
Because I've not known a love in me so strong
Because he loves me not or because he loves me so
I believe I won't ever truly know because he's a liar
To believe against humanity and science
That just lust and scientific nature calls me to love
Does it make me a fool?
Love in me feels so real
Is it just my hormones bulling me into reproduction?
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AmoriaDivine
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2014-07-29 21:39:48]
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Re: Keep His Love
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 1st August 2014 @ 06:44:13 PM AEST
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I can feel the emotion and confusion of thought in this.
You've packed a lot in to a short space, your point is made and nothing is wasted.
Keep writing!!
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Re: Keep His Love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd August 2014 @ 09:10:51 AM AEST
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We're all fools in love. Captivating write!
Cheers,
Mickey |
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