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Pack
Contributed by
spike
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Sunday, 27th July 2014 @ 04:36:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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animals in their element
love to hunt and kill,
nothing like a victim
to give them all a thrill
swarming on the innocent
picking on the weak,
animals in their element
trawl familiar beats
crazy gang behaviour
knives instead of claws,
guns reclaiming honour
gives everybody pause
they act as if they’re human,
walk upright and wear clothes
but they are feral in their element,
and now everybody knows.
Copyright ©
spike
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2014-07-27 04:36:34]
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Re: Pack
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 27th July 2014 @ 08:47:02 AM AEST
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very well structured...it has that 'iambic pentameter' or some such name (from ten million years ago in high school and college.
the content is worthy..overall, a very nice piece.
I like it.
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Re: Pack
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 27th July 2014 @ 05:39:22 PM AEST
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love the picture! love the poem! it is penned so
beautifully, it is creative and oh so clever!
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Pack
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th July 2014 @ 09:58:26 PM AEST
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Exactly. Bullets have no eyes. These animals you speak of give them guidance.
Very nicely done.
Thanks,
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Re: Pack
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 1st August 2014 @ 06:49:43 PM AEST
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Direct and hard hitting.
You make a point worth making and you make it well.
Really enjoyed reading, yet again.
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Re: Pack
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by ming on
Wednesday, 29th October 2014 @ 12:43:34 PM AEST
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| If a poem can take me along it a good one. This did. I'm a city dweller. |
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