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-Frequency-
Contributed by
gem48
on
Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Inside im screaming
Im trying to break free
My mute cry for help
Im the only one on the frequency
No one can hear me
Few adapt to the change
Help where they can.
Yet inside im screaming,
Im trying to break free.
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2003-05-21 04:35:00]
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Re: -Frequency-
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by tease_whizz on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 09:30:01 AM AEST
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| effective metaphor, it works well - makes me think of those moments when you're screaming and nobody hears. simply written but very emotive, Kate x |
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Re: -Frequency-
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by Ronald on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 07:23:49 AM AEST
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| Very emotional. This is a good poem |
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