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The Garden
Contributed by
speedy
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Saturday, 26th July 2014 @ 08:35:32 PM in AEST
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Flowers bloom;
The sun shines bright;
The breezes blow -
Oh, what a sight!
The roses red
& violets blue;
The pink carnations
Sit there for you.
White narcissus,
My mood is mellow;
Chrysanthemums
That shine bright yellow.
The lilies wave
To mark the way;
October's moon
To end the day.
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speedy
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2014-07-26 20:35:32]
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Re: The Garden
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 26th July 2014 @ 08:52:19 PM AEST
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very beautiful and peaceful...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Garden
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th July 2014 @ 09:20:08 PM AEST
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I can almost smell the sweet fragrance
of flowers after reading this...
my yard is wild, tall redwoods, some wild flowers
the sweet soil of Earth's fragrance comes out
in this --- no better family than that
Well done!
Peace! |
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Re: The Garden
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by JacobJowers on
Saturday, 26th July 2014 @ 09:27:24 PM AEST
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A simple poem yet well described
I can indeed see the flowers outside, even though there's no grass in my yard.
Keep writing. |
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Re: The Garden
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th July 2014 @ 09:39:55 PM AEST
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| I love this poem! Beautiful! |
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Re: The Garden
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 4th October 2014 @ 09:51:53 AM AEST
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Such pleasant imagery this gave me! I can almost smell the flowers. Nicely done.
~Scorp |
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Re: The Garden
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th November 2014 @ 12:27:18 AM AEST
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I love flowers and this beautiful poem reminded me of them. I love all the colors and smells they bring.
Thank you very much.
Tim
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Re: The Garden
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 05:04:56 AM AEST
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| Oh that big beautiful October moon, so crisp and sharp against the cold black canvas. What a time to be alive!!! |
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Re: The Garden
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th July 2015 @ 02:29:27 PM AEST
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| Sad, so very sad. I've felt October many times. |
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