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Relationships and Religion - weights to cast away
Contributed by
codeofcohen
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Wednesday, 23rd July 2014 @ 08:12:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She slips away like hours
Between your fingers crossed
She will drift forever outwards
And you will consider all hope lost
O but your fist will close
Upon its vaguest scent
And your mind will rack itself
For sins due a repent
Forgive yourself, O sad one
Dont let your will be bent
For you sought to evict the numbness
Some perseverence will bring relent
He slips away like fiction
Between the prayer said
And he will fall forever downwards
To bless the ocean bed
O but the waves will change his course unto "amen"
And the prayer will be answered
Neglecting how or when
Forgive him upon his payment
For once you collect the debt
He might serve you more faithfully
Not like before
Not now
Not yet
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2014-07-23 20:12:00]
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Re: Relationships and Religion - weights to cast away
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th July 2014 @ 06:56:12 PM AEST
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beautifully penned, such excellent imagery!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Relationships and Religion - weights to cast away
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by elle on
Saturday, 26th July 2014 @ 05:41:10 AM AEST
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| It's gentle. . . :) |
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Re: Relationships and Religion - weights to cast away
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by SuicidalSon on
Sunday, 10th May 2015 @ 08:16:11 AM AEST
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| I wish in fact I could collect , he owes so much outstanding debt. I've seen no sign not ever yet, I wonder if that debts been spent |
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