|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Living
Contributed by
northernlights
on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2014 @ 04:18:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
I live beneath the veil of life
Yet tread a path sustained.
I search to feel the rays of
Hope, and on and on I toil.
And then a nugget of wisdom
Gifted, from a friend gives wings, and
Lifts me to the warmth of a smile, a
Recognition of that elusive happiness!
A glimpsed moment of a chased dragon.
And I settle on top of contentment basking,
Till my equilibrium settles once more, and
My veil returns.
Copyright ©
northernlights
... [
2014-07-23 16:18:07]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Living
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2014 @ 08:03:27 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Your poetry is awesome! The flow and imagery works so well in this. I also love the way you used the idea of the veil to bring out the temporary nature of that contentment. |
|
|
Re: Living
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2014 @ 08:11:13 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I recognize that happiness and then, POOF, it's gone.
Very sad and somebody needs a hug. Even if to lift that veil for a moment, I send hugs your way.
♥ |
|
|
Re: Living
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th July 2014 @ 06:53:19 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
so beautifully penned, i really love this one!
hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
Re: Living
(User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 1st August 2014 @ 06:47:55 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I love the demonstration of the ebb and flow of positivity and hope here.
Like someone shaking your hand one minute then slapping your face the next.
Clever work as usual.
Steve |
|
|
Re: Living
(User Rating: 1 )
by spud on
Thursday, 7th August 2014 @ 01:32:36 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hi Anna,
A precise, and somewhat forlorn description of
shattered hope. But, hey! We rise and hope
again!
T
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
