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Haven
Contributed by
tin
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Tuesday, 22nd July 2014 @ 12:29:44 AM in AEST
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Cloud filtered sun bathes this haven so safe
when silent fathers pilfer words that they gave
hallowed this ground, pleasant these dreams
but all that could be was dashed by our schemes
of reckless thought of unreal desires
of sanguine scars of limitless fires
interred in this vessel of water and clay
juxtaposed with the mantra "come what may"
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tin
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2014-07-22 00:29:44]
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Re: Haven
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2014 @ 12:35:46 AM AEST
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beautifully penned with vivid imagery,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Haven
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2014 @ 04:37:14 AM AEST
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| I really like it! Imagistic and fascinating! |
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