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Twisted Sister
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Sunday, 20th July 2014 @ 11:20:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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I'm the captive audience
the vixens victim
adrift on the sea of illusions,
helpless to stop from
falling
Into the addiction of floating in bliss.
In a field of moans
I wander in a daze
and
in moments of clarity
I tremble with regret,
I am under your spell
there is no escape
you stick pins in the doll
and I start to twitch.
oh no more
I don't want it
stop
infecting me with your kiss....
in the mirror I seen the reflection
you are just a twisted sister,
oh my love bleeds
as you continue to feed.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
... [
2014-07-20 23:20:50]
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Re: Twisted Sister
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th July 2014 @ 11:27:08 PM AEST
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not at all what i was expecting! this is enchanting and
clever, loving and wicked good! beautifully penned to
hold your reader captive until the end!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Twisted Sister
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st July 2014 @ 12:19:57 AM AEST
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| I love this poem - such a unique and effective way of captivating the addiction and also the desire for this addiction to stop. |
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Re: Twisted Sister
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by AmoriaDivine on
Monday, 21st July 2014 @ 10:22:11 AM AEST
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Another beautiful piece... I'm looking forward to your next post. Thanks, again.
-Amoria |
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Re: Twisted Sister
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by alicewhite on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2014 @ 12:27:44 AM AEST
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magic love is still love and love is magic
love this poem beautiful and captivating
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Re: Twisted Sister
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by shereal_14 on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2014 @ 01:53:10 PM AEST
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| I found this to be a very telling work. To me this tells a very captivating story in just a few words, yet let's me see all the way into your soul. Impressive. Blessings, Sheryl. |
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