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I Hate You For Hurting Me
Contributed by
midian
on
Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i never thought you could hurt me like this!
i never thought you'd go out with that *****!
i never thought you'd say what you said!
i never thought i'd get so messed up in my head!
i remember the times we cuddled up on the couch
i remember the times we sat at school n we slouched
i remember exactly just what i did wrong
i remember exactly i dragged it out for too long!
you said we were in love and that nothing could take that away
but now you seem to hate me so i envision you in pain
i hope that you now suffer for all the pain that you caused me
but i hope that one day you will truely just miss being with me!
i miss holding your hand i miss seeing your smile
even though to you it may seem worthless, to me it seemed worthwhile
you could never understand the pain that came with your words
you never saw the tears or how hard the lessons were to learn.
now you have a "special someone" i hope she burns in hell
for the last time i looked at you my heart it seemed like it fell
how i long to make you pay for the way you screwed me up
but inside i know that you'll always be my little buttercup
so understand that i mean you harm hand harm i intend to do
but i know ways to hurt you ste ways that no-one knows but you
so once more my love i warn you to get her out of my site
because if i ever see her.. ill put up more than a ***** fight!
goodbye my love i'll miss you so
but just so you know you have to go!
Copyright ©
midian
... [
2003-05-21 01:05:00]
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Re: I Hate You For Hurting Me
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by cryingonmyporch on
Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 01:33:18 AM AEST
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Quite the powerful piece of work there. it's nice, thanks for sharing a lot of feeling and emotion I like that.
Always amy |
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Re: I Hate You For Hurting Me
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by obsidian_angel on
Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 08:14:48 AM AEST
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just wanted to express my feelings for your poem. its really good and i can really relate, believe me i know just how you feel.
good on you- obsidian_angel |
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Re: I Hate You For Hurting Me
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 08:44:59 PM AEST
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it's a paradox isn't it??
Good poem... deserves alot more than one star. |
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Re: I Hate You For Hurting Me
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 04:21:18 PM AEST
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An extreemly powerful write for a youngish poet. Venomous. Keep going it can only get better. I gave it 3
I hope I'll be forgiven for pushing my own work but I wrote "He's not the only one" for
many of the young disappointed girls that write on YPDC. |
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Re: I Hate You For Hurting Me
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:09:12 PM AEST
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| brilliant write. truely amazing. the lack of comments on your poems are starting to bother me because you deserve so many. you showed an excellent amount of anger, emotion, power, etc. you wrote it in format, even harder. you actually format in stanzas, shows you know a bit more than a lot of people on this site. you know that not every verse has to have an exclamation point to show feeling. the fact that in the first two stanzas that you used the same beginning of the verse over and over without me noticing (which i usually notice) shows how well this was written. |
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