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The Mighty have Fallen
Contributed by
Senates
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Saturday, 19th July 2014 @ 07:16:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Feelings of brilliance do not simply acuure,
It is a manifestation,
Everything,
A tool,
To be used by your own free will,
Use it positively,
You will bloom,
Use it negatively,
You will wilt,
No matter how insignificant a thing might seem,
That insignificance paves the road to greatness,
Or failure,
This was the begining of the end,
Because at first,
We were changed by life,
But as we grew,
Life was changed by us.
Copyright ©
Senates
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2014-07-19 19:16:49]
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Re: The Mighty have Fallen
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 19th July 2014 @ 07:40:57 PM AEST
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truly beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Mighty have Fallen
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th July 2014 @ 10:12:40 PM AEST
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wonderfully stated and positive
":feelings of brilliance" makes
me remember when I learn
the best because someone
has helped me, feelings of
brilliance, such a positive
space or tool, makes me more relaxed
and open, asking why why why
this and then that
theoretical, if true, why
what would it be if ---
perhaps if we ask then
we might see.
I really like this, not sure of the
word you used, "acuure", is it a typo
or a word of special meaning?
Thanks for sharing a positive
truth.
Peace!
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Re: The Mighty have Fallen
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by alicewhite on
Saturday, 19th July 2014 @ 11:30:24 PM AEST
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| Wow , Im loving you at this very moment, your words are speaking and Im hearing and im taking it all in, write some more please |
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Re: The Mighty have Fallen
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 20th July 2014 @ 09:37:16 AM AEST
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Very well done, Senates. The overall point is one we all need to keep in mind more than most of us do. (I speak for myself only). thanks for the reminder.
MM, the word I think he was going for is accrue. A typo.
Blessing for this poem!
Invierno |
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Re: The Mighty have Fallen
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by nikkib on
Sunday, 20th July 2014 @ 04:41:31 PM AEST
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| Extremely profound in a very simplistic way. I really like it. |
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Re: The Mighty have Fallen
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st July 2014 @ 03:54:28 AM AEST
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| So beautifully written and definitely thought provoking! I especially love the last four lines - so well put and profound :) |
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