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I Took Him Back
Contributed by
Josieee329
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Saturday, 19th July 2014 @ 11:34:53 AM in AEST
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"I Took Him Back"
He texted me today
I didn't know what to say
He said he still loved me
And then he called me baby
He asked me to be his
Well now that's a twist
Didn't see it coming
But oh I was so lonely
So took I him back
Didn't think back to the past
Now I'm walking on broken glass
Cause I took him back
I wish I had of said no
But I didn't wanna let go
Don't wanna wait too long
I've gotta fix what's wrong
He asked me to be his
Well now that's a twist
Didn't see it coming
But oh I was so lonely
So took I him back
Didn't think back to the past
Now I'm walking on broken glass
Cause I took him back
How could I have been so dumb
Oh he played me like a drum
He only wants one thing
I'm like a puppet on his string
Cause he only wants one thing
But I took him back
It all happened too fast
we're gonna repeat the past
Why did I take him back
He asked me to be his
Well now that's a twist
Didn't see it coming
But oh I was so lonely
So took I him back
Didn't think back to the past
Now I'm walking on broken glass
Cause I took him back
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Re: I Took Him Back
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 19th July 2014 @ 11:52:27 AM AEST
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wow, what a poem! hmm... have to say it- although it may work out in the long run and
one day be blissful; i am thinking you have done yourself a dis-service and settled- that
you know full well you deserve better; yet loneliness has had too much of a say in how
and who with you spend your time, don't short change yourself! you deserve happiness
and rainbows! ...anyway, this poem is beautifully penned, blessings,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: I Took Him Back
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th July 2014 @ 10:33:36 PM AEST
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abolish abolish, "well now that's a twist"
the very moment where two roads cross
but one can't! I really love this prospective
--- no you won't bleed again
because you know.
reminds me of a song I never knew the lyrics to but your poem seems so original.
Well done! Make him your puppet or let him go!
Best!
Peace!
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Re: I Took Him Back
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 1st August 2014 @ 07:03:24 PM AEST
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I like the way you have emphasised what you expect to be the inevitable in taking him back.
Amazing how the past has a way of coming back to haunt us, we cling to that vain thread of hope that things will change but all the time contrasting that with a notion that they won't.
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