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Sorry
Contributed by
Josieee329
on
Thursday, 17th July 2014 @ 04:09:41 PM in AEST
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I'm sorry I can't be prettier
And sorry I can't look like her
I'm sorry I just talk too much
And I'm sorry that I'm not enough
And I know I'm not the one you want
And I know that it's all my fault
I just wanna make you happy
But I hate that you just can't see
How perfect we would be
Together forever
but it's now or it's never
And I wonder if I'll ever
Be enough for you
Trying so hard to impress you
All day thinking about you
Do you even see the things I do
But the effort is fruitless
I cannot do this
Somebody help me
Cause I'm loosing this game
And I've lost you too
I don't know what to do
So I'll just cry over you
And wonder if you knew
The whole time what was going on
And I hate that you can't see
How perfect we would be
Together forever
but it's now or it's never
And I wonder if I'll ever
Be enough for you
Trying so hard to impress you
All day thinking about you
Do you even see the things I do
Copyright ©
Josieee329
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2014-07-17 16:09:41]
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Re: Sorry
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by Geneva1223 on
Thursday, 17th July 2014 @ 08:46:59 PM AEST
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| Great poem! You really stirred up alot of emotions in me. This is a beautiful sad written peom! Good Job |
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Re: Sorry
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by softerware on
Thursday, 17th July 2014 @ 11:01:32 PM AEST
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Well done. I am taken back to so many places on the wings of your beautiful words. How hard to realize that although we offer, some do not accept.
and you have expressed that very well!
It is a reminder to be patient with ourselves..and a sweets and touching testimonial to love not lost..but never gained.
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Re: Sorry
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by Invierno on
Friday, 18th July 2014 @ 08:18:28 AM AEST
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This is exceptional. There's not to many poems that create a tightness in my eyes and a constriction in my throat. This did- I suppose there is a bit of relevance for me here as relates to my Mom.
Your use of the language to convey your thoughts is truly an inspirational bit of writing.
Thank you,
Invierno |
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Re: Sorry
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 18th July 2014 @ 07:07:28 PM AEST
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wow, moving and so full of longing, beautifully
expressed, tho- love will do as it will...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Sorry
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by jyssvw22 on
Sunday, 20th July 2014 @ 01:57:40 PM AEST
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| Love it. I get it. Good write. |
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Re: Sorry
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by Flex4life13 on
Sunday, 20th July 2014 @ 06:51:01 PM AEST
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| The most beautiful person must have written this piece, never sell yourself short, never speak badly of yourself! Everything she isn't, she never will be and everything you are, you are meant to be, embrace it because you are beautiful. |
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