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When We Kiss
Contributed by
spike
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Tuesday, 15th July 2014 @ 04:37:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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and when we kiss,
will I be surprised?
sheer delight from silken lips
or distance in your eyes?
when we embrace,
will you melt into my arms?
resistance or surrender
to the heart and all its charms?
so many expectations
before the maiden touch,
all that we invest
never seems too much
and when we kiss,
will you be surprised?
all that you had dreamed
or disappointment in your eyes?
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2014-07-15 04:37:36]
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Re: When We Kiss
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by fredmonte101 on
Tuesday, 15th July 2014 @ 10:34:03 AM AEST
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Re: When We Kiss
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th July 2014 @ 03:22:06 PM AEST
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anticipation, sweet and worrisome all at once,
this is beautifully penned....
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: When We Kiss
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by spud on
Wednesday, 16th July 2014 @ 03:32:07 AM AEST
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Hi Spike,
Well, we can't all be Rudolph Valentinos,
but I would offer that the magic is in
the sincerity. As I read this I have an image
of 'The Kiss' by Rodin.
Well sculpted, my friend.
S
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