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Is it ever too late?
Contributed by
nikkib
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Tuesday, 15th July 2014 @ 01:25:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I don't even know where you are,
I don't even know who you are,
I thought I was right,
you thought I was wrong,
I thought I was fighting...trying to be strong.
Time was passing me by,
I was so afraid and living a lie.
I couldn't face the truth it just hurt so much,
I was delusional and out of touch.
I was incapable of love....
Especially trust.
I wish I held the magic watch to rewind the time, and make you mine.
But some things just aren't meant to be
a prime example is you and me.
Copyright ©
nikkib
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2014-07-15 01:25:24]
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Re: Is it ever too late?
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by Blackheart on
Sunday, 20th July 2014 @ 05:55:36 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem...and not exactly in the love aspect that I relate to, but the general aspect of struggling to get past what could've been but won't ever be. That spoke to me the most, that's where I felt your pain |
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Re: Is it ever too late?
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 2nd August 2014 @ 09:35:00 AM AEST
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A perfect capture of a delicate nuance. I don't know you, but I wish I did. The way you write (and think) makes for an intriguing person.
Best,
Invierno |
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Re: Is it ever too late?
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 12:32:11 AM AEST
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| Very good write, I loved that last line too. If Invierno is reading you I know I am in the right place! And youhave a great friend in him as well. Great first post to YPDC |
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