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sweet as rain
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Monday, 14th July 2014 @ 07:27:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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i knew a girl sweet as rain
she was soft and never a shamed
she questioned god and the answers of the day
she says maybe somehow, someway
everything will be okay
I know that precious sweet taste
that soul could never be tamed
she was soft but never a shamed
she questioned man and why his good nature rapes
she screams maybe some one will learn to wait
and everything will be okay
she confessed to me in song
flowers are alive to wave on
birds fly to breath mothers air
and the trees are strength and longing for hope and care
she sung to me
she sung me along
she sung to me
she sung me this song
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Re: sweet as rain
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th July 2014 @ 11:24:53 PM AEST
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first of all i absolutely love the title you chose,
and your poem; truly beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: sweet as rain
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 28th July 2020 @ 12:49:13 AM AEST
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| Absolutely awesome.....absolutely.... |
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