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My Revelations

Contributed by boomking on Saturday, 12th July 2014 @ 03:42:50 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

These are the days, things come to light.
Which can be a delight,
if we choose to embrace the opportunity.

For at such moments,
it is the spirit of life,
visiting us.

Whispering in our ears:
Remember ur purpose.
Ur god given mission.

We may loose the things,
that kept us occupied.
So we are freed,
preparing us for our destiny.

To be ready to serve a greater good,
as we get into the mood.

Whatever we loose as things come to the light,
it will make our life lighter.

So shed those burdens,
stop pretending the're an asset.

And you will soon realise,
your life will take of.
As you go forward,
claiming your one true reward:

To have lived the life u chose to,
even before you we're born.

Copyright © boomking ... [ 2014-07-12 15:42:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Revelations (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th July 2014 @ 11:17:50 PM AEST
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before being born the revelation
I did not know
was still only a silent shadow
perhaps like dark matter
or black hole
A shadow from light
within in a given space
A choice of voice however
faint...

Sorry, there's something that registered with your poem boomking...
It pops out at me although I know it's undone.

Yes the weight with the gravity, is it light or
to become lite as a feather
and spread ones wings in flight

If this can be achieved still a shadow
below... spirit or ghost

Peace!

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