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YOUR GLASS
Contributed by
hray42
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Friday, 11th July 2014 @ 01:13:22 PM in AEST
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your glass to fall will make a sound
when filled to the rim with wine
too much already, the problem found
was taken so heavy with dine
your glass to shatter when meets the floor
red wine to spill like blood
no shape to call it, no steadied poor
to run like a river in flood
a toast to you and to your glass
was meant and spoken from heart
your glass to fall from it's place so fast
before it did come apart
be off then from this spoiled room!
in shame should you hold your head
the chambermaid will show with her broom
to sweep up what was ruined instead...
Copyright ©
hray42
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2014-07-11 13:13:22]
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Re: YOUR GLASS
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Saturday, 12th July 2014 @ 07:31:49 AM AEST
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Really good writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: YOUR GLASS
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th July 2014 @ 08:11:04 PM AEST
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just as bad with plastic cup. nice use of I don't know what you call it, reality and imagery, a shame as well as a proper place of thought.
A fine poem.
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