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Who are you to me?
Contributed by
northernlights
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Friday, 11th July 2014 @ 02:24:30 AM in AEST
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Life seeps through the pores of my skin and saturates
My mind,chemistry bubbles in sustaining cycles and I
Do what I need to do,what I have to do.
Creativity in dormancy plays the waiting game till flesh
Cannot contain nor hold,and I am compelled as words
Become the feral expression in unrecognised sterility.
In a world of instant communication with the soul on bypass
My toes allowed the balm of accepting waters,and years of
Expression,pages for my voice,freedom for who I am,
And I can return always to YPDC.
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2014-07-11 02:24:30]
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Re: Who are you to me?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th July 2014 @ 09:31:02 PM AEST
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Yes, and please continue to return.... PLEASE!!! And thank you .
Wait, I just got a text message...hmmm..hmm..hmm..hmmm... ;-) just kidding but it really struck me and made me think about the mindless blobs with their noses in their phones at work when I read the line about instant communication with the soul on bypass.
We love you too, Anna. ♥
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Re: Who are you to me?
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th July 2014 @ 07:54:39 AM AEST
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Well, I'm so happy when u do come back 'cause I miss ya writing when u r not posting.
Great job as always.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Who are you to me?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th July 2014 @ 08:29:59 PM AEST
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Northernlights - this is so expressive and says so much about ones soul... and what words can do.
"Who are you to me?" is an absolutely brilliant title to this well written poem.
Peace! |
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Re: Who are you to me?
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by softerware on
Sunday, 13th July 2014 @ 10:52:36 AM AEST
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We're so glad that you DO come back to YPDC!
I have so many favorite turns of phrase here:
"words become the feral expression".."with the soul on bypass"…and most of all "pages for my voice"!
Food for the soul of every aspiring writer.
It is WE who are thankful, northern lights!
softerware |
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Re: Who are you to me?
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 13th July 2014 @ 11:33:08 AM AEST
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What a great dissection of our human condition. So very well done!
Didn't know you were gone, being a newbie here myself. But, that said, I am glad to be able to read your words.
Thanks,
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Re: Who are you to me?
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th July 2014 @ 10:28:23 PM AEST
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you write so truly beautifully, every line always full of imagery
and heart moving eloquence, we do not know each other well
yet altho i am in awe of some of the things you pen, blessings,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Who are you to me?
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by spud on
Monday, 14th July 2014 @ 08:10:46 AM AEST
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Hi Anna,
The pen writes, and having writ ..................
YPDC is your home - don't go anywhere or we'll
send out search parties!
T
x
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