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The Light that I see is Me
Contributed by
codeofcohen
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Monday, 7th July 2014 @ 02:43:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Please believe
That as she reaches the summit
Of realisation
The epiphany
Of the words you spoke
So softly; long ago
Will enlighten her
With a lovingly vicious strike
Is it her,
Falling from the skies
To be caught
And held
In your arms?
Is it the hand
Of the worlds second most successful lie
Striking the delusion from your mind
Leaving you with only
Animalistic instincts?
It is you.
Your own perfect self.
My God says:
The light at the end of the tunnel is you!
We need only the water
Of insiration
To allow our tree to grow
Bearing the fruits of strength
And indestructible will
To feed our engine for success
My God, I live by your carnal word
The light that I see,
Is me.
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2014-07-07 14:43:43]
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Re: The Light that I see is Me
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 7th July 2014 @ 03:03:33 PM AEST
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beautifully penned, a lovely graceful read,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Light that I see is Me
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by Archie on
Thursday, 10th July 2014 @ 03:31:03 PM AEST
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Your style is good in this one, just as it was in the last one I read.
The light I see at the end of the tunnel is not me, maybe I should consider changing that. I'm not sure I'm ready to just yet. |
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