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WHAT TO SEE AT DAY
Contributed by
hray42
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Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 04:19:21 PM in AEST
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i can't last the heartache...
it's killing me this time
i can't last the heartache...
it's really killing me this time
oh, devils and demons get out of my mind
i can't last the heartache...
it's killing me this time
over many oceans i have sailed
and many miles i have walked
but i can't last the heartache...
it's killing me this time
so, i will fly off into the night
like an owl to swoop on prey
only, my swoop will be a downward plight
i will not last to see the day...
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2014-07-02 16:19:21]
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Re: WHAT TO SEE AT DAY
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by dvtpdw on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 04:21:31 PM AEST
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| Your words carry such a strong sadness, a despondency that transcends your words. Like you've read my heart - made an impression on me. Like it - very great write, P |
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Re: WHAT TO SEE AT DAY
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 09:01:45 PM AEST
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very sad and lonely, the devastating feeling and hopeless
reasoning of the heart just breaks mine,
hugs n' love nessa |
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