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þære lufræden
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 02:20:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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O perchance in breaking light of day
when things and thoughts seem so affray
oft whilst all of one's soul has been applied
verily this same old song is sung worldwide
for surely as the sun rises and falls again
yet valiant hope it shall remain
O put thyself out there ond giving sigh
nay sit only thinking ond wondering why
alas no more promises nor shifting winds
even deep blackest pitch night has wings
on what mayhap this soul is only breathing
'tis wistfully eternally ever believing
O 'tis force by sprinkled time love reigns
happiness alone wæs most ardent flames
fore rain would not leave clouds in skies
faire across moonbeams beauteous eyes
whence heart it longs ond endless seeks
tenderest echo which does bespeak
Oft black place sown nor alone indeed
thus oft fierce ond fine planted seeds
soulfully resides within solitudes requiem
lufræden's words softly gracing dreams
thou quill ond parchment by candle's light
penning moral obliquity unto long nights
þære own mournful kindness to bemoan
midnight sun taketh- herein adorns
O þære lufræden!
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ladyfawn
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2014-07-01 14:20:42]
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Re: þære lufræden
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by weemick on
Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 04:14:23 PM AEST
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Oh too see someone who can write with older style. To read a piece that seeps so gently Into the heart, words that have meaning, words of Love. You have opened your heart and let the words flow forth In grace and majesty. I always think that one must truly feel the Love to be able to write of Love so well. A dream In words. I really enjoyed this read.
Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE. |
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Re: þære lufræden
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by colinb on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 01:10:52 AM AEST
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| beautiful you have a pure soul Nessa |
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Re: þære lufræden
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 07:38:21 AM AEST
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love it! I'm a fan of archaic style....so nice and what a great premise.
Well done,.
Best,
Invierno |
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Re: þære lufræden
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 11:14:47 AM AEST
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I have no idea what þære lufræden means. I tried translate with Bing and googled it. Nothing. *hangs head in shame*
Yet there was such a gentle beauty reading this. Reminded me of Shakespeare. I love the way I could see these lines:
thou quill ond parchment by candle's light
penning moral obliquity unto long nights
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: þære lufræden
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by spud on
Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 07:50:52 AM AEST
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Hi Nessa,
Thank you for all your past and present comments.
Much appreciated.
Now this has a definite oldy English style about it - in words
chosen and in flow. Chaucer would have commended you
on this 'musical' piece.
I love the ''out of the ordinary!'' Great writing.
T
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Re: þære lufræden
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 5th July 2014 @ 08:19:17 PM AEST
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Nessa,
This is such a beautifully penned piece of poetry. I have truly enjoyed reading this. Thank you. Well done. :O) Keep on penning. Keep up with the great work. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us. We truly appreciate it.
*S* Cynthia
*S* Cynthia |
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Re: þære lufræden
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by JohnRhinem on
Saturday, 9th August 2014 @ 08:58:50 PM AEST
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| Makes me wish to pen my own lulu pooh poe but, twas a dream we've seen their shadow lurk; with hopeful eyes they shan't desguise..A cry she weeps yet nay she knows; of ancient lore where apples grow....KLove * |
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Re: þære lufræden
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 2nd August 2015 @ 09:55:16 AM AEST
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Flawless!! What a wonderful read...Smooth tempo and mesmerizing imagery! My favourite line:
Even deep blackest pitch night has wings ...
YES!!!
Overall, the third stanza is what stands out the most to me. Beautiful! Excellent poem, my dear.
~Scorp |
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