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Thin ice on hot water

Contributed by codeofcohen on Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 09:05:54 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Its strange

How thin ice will form
On a sea of hot water
I'm dealing pleasure
To the devils daughter
I was fishing in blood
When I found I'd caught her
I realise too late
For how long I have sought her

I was up no good
And she had the criteria
That put in our joined hands
Could cause mass hysteria
I realise too late
That her other side can sear ya
If she feels threatened,
My friend,
Dont make her fear ya

I noticed a change
A twist in the tale
She fought not with words
Nor tooth
Nor nail
She gets the job done
Via crippling blackmail
I realise too late
I mistook bullets
For hail

For years I searched
And found no trace
Of who I'm to blame
For the vicious disgrace
I realise too late
That I lost my place
For spotting wild fantasy
For finally giving chase

Copyright © codeofcohen ... [ 2014-07-01 09:05:54]
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Re: Thin ice on hot water (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 11:29:58 AM AEST
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intriguing title, interesting poem, beautifully well woven
words in a neat poetic package,

hugs n' love nessa

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