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Little Girl
Contributed by
Angelgirl365
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Monday, 30th June 2014 @ 10:33:11 PM in AEST
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FamilyPoems
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So why’d you go and leave
didn’t you love me
you left me all alone
a girl without her father
but you see I never learned
how to love a man
little girl
please believe
you’re worth more
than what your father can bring
and little girl one day you’ll see
one man will love you even more than your father could
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Re: Little Girl
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by Invierno on
Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 06:34:42 AM AEST
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Some sad stuff here.
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Re: Little Girl
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 02:22:37 PM AEST
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The dad is a loser then. You definitely bring up the truth though, that being that the little girl is worth more than the dad can bring. Be strong and keepa writin.
Need to say something though since you don't read/comment on anyone of our other poet's creations.
YPDC is a great place. Part of what it makes it a great place is that people come on here and actually read poems and, like me, we also comment on them. We also use our time to read and comment. It would be a very sad and boring place if we were like you and just came on here to post poems and then leave. Imagine that. We only knew how to write poems and not how to read them. What would be the point? Post our out poems and then poof, gone. I could post fifty in one day because I am a premium member...pushing everyone's poems down the page...oh, wait, there is no one else...only me. Would be sad.
Don't mean to come off mean, but do you see my point? What's the point of writing and sharing if no one reads?
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Little Girl
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by fadingaway on
Sunday, 7th September 2014 @ 01:12:28 AM AEST
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| I've been there. But I was the son. Keep writing. You are very talented. |
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