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A formal date with Hazel
Contributed by
codeofcohen
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Friday, 27th June 2014 @ 05:34:04 AM in AEST
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Can I buy you a drink?
And would you like a cigarette?
You look enchanting
As always, Ms. Harpin.
And these poisons make you so deliciously seductive.
We both are running the same race.
Lets not keep it a secret.
You're on your last drag
And it wont be the last cigarette that you smoke tonight,
if I'm lucky.
I guess you remember me after all, and I'm glad, because I remember every bit of you.
Every inch.
But the smoke from the Marlboros is making it hard for me to see your face, perhaps we could adress these facade matters over some whiskey and cigarettes at mine? Wonderful.
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Re: A formal date with Hazel
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by Invierno on
Friday, 27th June 2014 @ 11:16:25 AM AEST
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good imagery
Invierno |
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Re: A formal date with Hazel
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th June 2014 @ 01:13:52 PM AEST
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the images are great lol, i liked the back and forth banter,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: A formal date with Hazel
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th June 2014 @ 08:21:30 PM AEST
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poetry pure
I'm off into an adventure with your dialogue
Truly brilliant prose. You show a real talent !
Peace! |
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