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Where We Belong
Contributed by
northernlights
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Monday, 23rd June 2014 @ 09:50:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I'll wait for you on the top of the hill,
Where freedom breathes the skies.
I'll wait for you with every breath,
Till death my life despise.
I'll turn my face once more to feel,
Your whisper on my brow.
And know that you and I will know,
The past, the here,the now.
For every soft green meadow trod,
And every waiting stile.
Turn again and turn I must, to see
Your endless smile.
And I will find you once again, in
The shade of an acorn tree.
Where nature knows where we
Belong,in loves eternity.
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northernlights
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2014-06-23 09:50:37]
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Re: Where We Belong
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by Invierno on
Monday, 23rd June 2014 @ 04:07:11 PM AEST
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Diggin' it. Nice, bouncy write. Well done.
Invierno |
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Re: Where We Belong
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th June 2014 @ 11:09:38 PM AEST
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| This is amazingly beautiful! I love the poem - its flow, its imagery, its delicate and personal emotions and the rhyme, which works so well in the poem! |
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Re: Where We Belong
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th June 2014 @ 11:22:44 PM AEST
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This is so stunningly beautiful it hardly sounds like a "love remembered" poem.
"In the wind he's still alive".
The writer will one day catch that wind.
Yes, stunningly beautiful masterpiece! That'sa whatta I said. :) |
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Re: Where We Belong
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 25th June 2014 @ 03:02:18 PM AEST
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| I have to admit this is cool just as the others said. You have skill with the pen. |
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Re: Where We Belong
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th June 2014 @ 02:30:40 PM AEST
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so beautifully penned, it seems as if the love was lost
by death, the way you see him in acorn trees and
waiting with every breath... absolutely so lovely,
brought a tear to my eye...
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Where We Belong
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by spud on
Thursday, 26th June 2014 @ 02:47:06 PM AEST
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Hi Anna,
Beautiful rhythmic flow - not forced, not
exaggerated - its mood reminds me of Victorian
love style and though the word 'Victorian'
conjures up the past, or dated, this genre of
poetry will never die and will always be
welcomed in poetry circles across the globe.
Something to think about ........ most of the
poetry lines that you hear quoted today, are
from that era in time.
T
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Re: Where We Belong
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by desciple on
Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 01:13:40 PM AEST
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| Amazing write, thank you for sharing, the journey of love is beautiful and the memories last a life time. Hold them, cherish them, embrace them...awesome!! |
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