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Didn't Want To Say Goodbye
Contributed by
Angelgirl365
on
Sunday, 22nd June 2014 @ 10:44:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Didn’t Want To Say Goodbye
At 15 she had her first overdose
but the world didn’t want to say goodbye
so she stayed to see another day
at 16 she had her second overdose
but her mom didn’t want to say goodbye
so she stayed to see another day
at 17 she had her third overdose
but the world didn’t want to say goodbye
so she stayed to see another day
at 18 she finally realized her life was of value
and started living the life she fought so hard to end
never wanting to say goodbye
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2014-06-22 22:44:36]
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Re: Didn't Want To Say Goodbye
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by Invierno on
Monday, 23rd June 2014 @ 06:09:23 AM AEST
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well, damn! thank goodness for that fourth Stanza!
gives new meaning to 'third time's a charm".
Invierno |
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Re: Didn't Want To Say Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th June 2014 @ 11:00:36 PM AEST
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I love the ending - the idea that in the end, after all, there is something worth living for.
It's so sad to think that so many people in the world only feel pain, despair, hunger and so many other means of suffering I cannot even imagine - perhaps leading some to suicide.
I guess, the poem reminded me of our vulnerability as humans, our need for second chances, and how important it is to help one another find the hope which lets us see the priceless value of our lives. |
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Re: Didn't Want To Say Goodbye
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th June 2014 @ 02:27:03 PM AEST
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beautifully penned, it shows the tragic suffering thru
the years and happily a positive ending:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Didn't Want To Say Goodbye
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by fadingaway on
Sunday, 7th September 2014 @ 01:14:38 AM AEST
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| It's always worth fighting for. Nothing is as strong as gentleness. Nothing is as gentle as true strength. |
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