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Song for the Masses
Contributed by
jockphillips
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Friday, 20th June 2014 @ 09:21:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It’s obviously a church setting
And there’s the organ blaring chord things
Because the organ player lady hit some note structures
Smashing lightly on the key mechanisms
Probably wailing on some foot petals too but it’s hard to see
Church choir background
A pretty big group of people all singing basically the same drone thing
And everyone in the church pews all singing this old song poem
Regarding the topic of the Jesus and some anecdotes about his life
Copyright ©
jockphillips
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2014-06-20 09:21:47]
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Re: Song for the Masses
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by Invierno on
Friday, 20th June 2014 @ 04:37:32 PM AEST
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I like the reduction of the act to what it really is. Well done and thanks
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Re: Song for the Masses
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st June 2014 @ 11:37:54 PM AEST
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reporter at writ at large
description conscript of child
eye. What is in the mind that wonders...
Just the facts
The pewleaflet that first part,
then it seems to repeat itself
summation of hymnal or a hymen
earnestly I sat and saw the beautiful
girl mesmerized like a servant clerk
but I suppose you have to rehearse
it and watch the mouths or listen
again and again without reading.
I like it. Quite original!
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