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The Sound Is Love
Contributed by
texasman
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Wednesday, 18th June 2014 @ 06:44:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I follow a though
From time to time
I see it move
Along a then red line
It glows with warmth
And a calming light
like nothing I have seen
In any night
It sings a song
That covers its past
and then it becomes
A crescent mass
Moving threw my mind
And winters bound
it was there that it became
A soothing sound,
It flowed so gently
Thru time and space
landing there
In that calming place
I see the sound
As it burst with light
it helps me thru
My black of night
And the sound is love
And I can here it say
that I am here
And here I’ll stay
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Re: The Sound Is Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th June 2014 @ 07:06:06 PM AEST
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I'm also sixty and no, thinking about love and the desire for it does not stop.
I really like this poem but you may want to check your spelling a bit closer. It detracts from the flow.
I follow a though
(thought?)
Moving threw my mind
(through...threw is the past tense of throw)
Thru is actually spelled through.
So anyways,  to YPDC. It is a great place. Part of what it makes it a great place is that people come on here and actually read poems and, like me, we also comment on them. We take our time out to post and read and comment. It would be a very sad and boring place if we were like you and just came on here to post poems and then leave. Imagine that. We only knew how to write poems and not how to read them. What would be the point? Post our poems and then, poof, gone. Would be sad if we all did that.
Don't mean to come off mean, but do you see my point? What's the point of writing and sharing if no one reads or comments?
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: The Sound Is Love
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 18th June 2014 @ 08:41:20 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.I really enjoyed the verse.Glad I stopped in for a few.
Michelle |
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Re: The Sound Is Love
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by Boomking on
Thursday, 19th June 2014 @ 04:28:54 AM AEST
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| I love what this poem conveys, powerfull write! |
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Re: The Sound Is Love
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 20th June 2014 @ 06:05:11 PM AEST
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| truly beautiful, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Sound Is Love
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by Geneva1223 on
Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 11:03:17 AM AEST
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| this is the third poem i read of yours... you keep impressing please keep writting more |
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