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Take
Contributed by
desciple
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Wednesday, 11th June 2014 @ 03:13:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Take my eyes,
Take my sight,
Take my ability to fight,
Just give me a final breath one final second
Till I have nothing left and anything to give.
Break my legs,
Take my ability to walk,
Just give me one final breath one final second
Till I have nothing left and anything to give.
Take my blood,
Take my heart,
Just give me one final breath one final second
Till I have nothing left and anything to give.
Just leave me with my soul,
Leave me with your scent,
Memories of your touch,
The essence of your kiss.
Take my pain
Take my fears,
Leave the joy,
Leave me whole,
Leave with your love that has renewed my soul.
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2014-06-11 15:13:46]
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Re: Take
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by RussellReinhardt on
Wednesday, 11th June 2014 @ 03:36:39 PM AEST
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Hello
I don't know how your love was lost. You don't say. This is a very sad poem however very good expression and deep emotions. Love lost in any form is a tragedy of epic proportions. Love is a most precious gift. Blessing
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Rus |
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Re: Take
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 11th June 2014 @ 03:42:32 PM AEST
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| to me this poem is not sad. I feel very inspired by it. I know those feelings of desperation when we are ready to lose it all as long we can just hold onto the memories and a love that has made us feel complete. your subject line sums it up wonderfully. "they can take it all, just don't take that please." |
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Re: Take
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 11:28:06 PM AEST
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if this isn't unconditional love, i don't know what is..................
hugs n' love nessa |
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