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The Struggle of wordless thoughts
Contributed by
purplestary
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Tuesday, 10th June 2014 @ 07:28:12 PM in AEST
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Staring down again at a page of open space.
Wondering why I always run back to this place.
The blankness, this completely empty page,
It all means nothing when I'm in this rage,
Just trying to spill the tears from my eyes
and leave them here on this canvas where everything dies.
Clearly she must be depressed again they say,
I wonder what brings her back today?
Where are the words that release this pain?
I need to write something, to shut off this brain!
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Re: The Struggle of wordless thoughts
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by speedy on
Tuesday, 10th June 2014 @ 08:52:06 PM AEST
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Great write.
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Re: The Struggle of wordless thoughts
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 10th June 2014 @ 09:46:19 PM AEST
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hopefully you feel better soon, this is so true of
all at times::Staring down again at a page of
open space.Wondering why I always run back to
this place. keep writing!!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Struggle of wordless thoughts
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by RussellReinhardt on
Wednesday, 11th June 2014 @ 02:23:44 PM AEST
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Hello
Firstly there is nothing wrong with this write. Flows well reads easy and the story and rhyming is not forced. However if and when the creative juices escape you just take a break. That's what I do at least. Then on a day it comes in full force and you can't stop it. You just write and write. So relax there is nothing wrong with you we all have a black page or two from time to time. Blessings.
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