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Don't Quit on me
Contributed by
Ferrari14
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Tuesday, 10th June 2014 @ 03:39:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I had never quit on you in this distant relationship, So why are you thinking about quitting on me, I had struck by you thinking about quitting on me, I had struck by you when your own family was against you, If me loving you so much i will let you go then, Perhaps, i love you too strong to even think about letting you go out of my life for good, I never put you on a pedestal to allow this relationship to dissolve, I have known my whole life, Evidently,you have eyes for another woman,I am tired of chasing you back and forth, I want to experience true love once again, Towards love, understanding, honestly and not nobody else quitting on me.
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Re: Don't Quit on me
(User Rating: 1 ) by reprobate on
Thursday, 12th June 2014 @ 04:26:27 PM AEST (User
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Moral:
Sometimes what we think we need or want isn't it our best interest to have. It can be more than self-destructive to give and give and not be a recipient of even the most modest of giving.
Technical:
This seems sort of rambling...was that intentional? I know personally that a break-down within a relationship can make one so disjointed that the only way to communicate is a ramble. If it is meant to be so, then you have captured the essence. If not, then perhaps you could break this down into seperate thoughts and expound from there.
Other than that, this is a realistic, sorrow tinged write. Hope all works out as it is needed and desired!
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