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Lifeless
Contributed by
ferrari14
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Monday, 9th June 2014 @ 05:18:48 PM in AEST
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How could i go on living a fantasy,After i had thought it was impossible dreaming a luxury dream, Perhaps i could not go on living with my daily problems as day in and day out,I had want to take a step forward in my life to success, However, i did not go backwards towards dreaming another terrifying past, I dream of sitting in my corner not understanding and moping about my unhappy life, I was use to the idea of me getting fired up for nothing, As i continue to carry this huge load unto my shoulders for years, I had to break these four walls from within my dreams to be free, As for depression sticking around me i was tired of going through, I had need to snap out of my horrible dreams to not feel trap anymore, Of course i had want everything to go smoothly in my life, Despite of the many difficulties that i had to face in my life, As the fears constantly staying on my mind the tears would not fade away for a moment, My life was lifeless if i had continue to accept misfortune out of living simple fear and lack of unhappiness.
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Re: Lifeless
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by brew on
Tuesday, 10th June 2014 @ 09:47:55 AM AEST
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Sadness, but keep going, living and trying, We all have many turmoils in life with us, or behind us. Smile......it makes people wonder what your thinking.lol
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Re: Lifeless
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by reprobate on
Thursday, 12th June 2014 @ 04:31:44 PM AEST
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There is definitely a sadness to this. And positive woven throughout!
Keep fighting the good fight!
Thanks for sharing... |
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Re: Lifeless
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th June 2014 @ 07:44:23 PM AEST
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dream a luxury, dream for life. This sounds very hard, it must be. You push to get through yet
your dream doesn't begin to start.
A dream is a start, a reason for life.
I really take heart with your poem Lifeless.
I don't believe in permanent affliction. I don't know your past or present situation but I believe you should,
Write all you can!
Thank you!
Peace! |
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